it became less and less what view he’s attributing to mainstream experts, or what his alternative is supposed to be.
less and less → less and less clear?
I have no plans of discussing is Taubes claims
discussing is Taubes → discussing Taubes?
D’oh. Fixed.
Also,
wouldn’t have made for as an exciting of a book.
is not as of a good grammatical structure as it could be. I suggest rephrasing.
Also:
which I attempt won’t quote from
Drop the attempt.
can be cause on multiple levels
cause → caused
less and less → less and less clear?
discussing is Taubes → discussing Taubes?
D’oh. Fixed.
Also,
is not as of a good grammatical structure as it could be. I suggest rephrasing.
Also:
Drop the attempt.
cause → caused