I think you should have been more critical of the appeal to “Wake, Watch, Wonder” that AI will automatically be good. You could say, for example, that there have been many arguments made that AI will be fundamentally friendly, and every one you know is false, and that there are many good reasons to expect AIs to be indifferent about human life. Or that it sounds like the author was anthropomorphizing AI, which leads you to incorrect conclusions. For example, the claims about evolution and so on only work if the AI is already structured as if it evolved just like humans, but there’s no reason at all why that should be the case.
I think you should have been more critical of the appeal to “Wake, Watch, Wonder” that AI will automatically be good. You could say, for example, that there have been many arguments made that AI will be fundamentally friendly, and every one you know is false, and that there are many good reasons to expect AIs to be indifferent about human life. Or that it sounds like the author was anthropomorphizing AI, which leads you to incorrect conclusions. For example, the claims about evolution and so on only work if the AI is already structured as if it evolved just like humans, but there’s no reason at all why that should be the case.