I like that a lot, but I don’t think it’s particularly corny. Also, may I suggest different wording? ‘gin and tonic’ is too long and too many syllables; it spoils the back and forth rhythm and isn’t memorable. Perhaps use 2 drinks which are both one syllable?
I like that a lot, but I don’t think it’s particularly corny. Also, may I suggest different wording? ‘gin and tonic’ is too long and too many syllables; it spoils the back and forth rhythm and isn’t memorable. Perhaps use 2 drinks which are both one syllable?