Definitely interesting.
Typos etc: “believes to have” seems like a failed attempt to avoid using gendered pronouns (you still said “his garage”).
No, that was… actually, I’m not entirely sure what it was. Anyway, fixed. :)
while we’re on typos, I think “transubstation” should be “transubstantiation”.
Though this makes me want to write a Catholic-ritual themed modern fantasy story just so I can include a mechanical prayer network of transubstations.
You might like James D. Macdonald’s Peter Crossman stories.
Definitely interesting.
Typos etc: “believes to have” seems like a failed attempt to avoid using gendered pronouns (you still said “his garage”).
No, that was… actually, I’m not entirely sure what it was. Anyway, fixed. :)
while we’re on typos, I think “transubstation” should be “transubstantiation”.
Though this makes me want to write a Catholic-ritual themed modern fantasy story just so I can include a mechanical prayer network of transubstations.
You might like James D. Macdonald’s Peter Crossman stories.