Honestly I think “Albus’ own father—” would works better.
Yes, you’re probably right. I wanted to comment only on what could be done with the grammar while keeping the same basic text.
If he did want to preserve that, yeah, I think your take on it’s the best bet.
Yes, you’re probably right. I wanted to comment only on what could be done with the grammar while keeping the same basic text.
If he did want to preserve that, yeah, I think your take on it’s the best bet.