I’m looking for feedback on my blog drafts & posts—I’m not writing for specifically rationalist audience, but I’d appreciate intelligent feedback on accuracy, additional ideas to possibly include, as well as feedback on how I communicate.
Where is a good place to get such feedback? LessWrong has a lot of the right sort of people, but posting lots of draft posts to the open thread may not be popular.
My blog is Habitua—it’s on self-improvement, attempting to be evidence-based as much as practicable.
The intention was to give some direction as to the kinds of plans that can be effective in overcoming procrastination. I can see that more detailed suggestions would be helpful, and I’ll look at that in future posts. I’m deliberately keeping posts short, so I actually get them done and posted.
The post about advertising also seems to lack a clear goal.
I thought that was an interesting insight into communication and the nature of advertising, but you’re right—the goal was not so clear.
I’m looking for feedback on my blog drafts & posts—I’m not writing for specifically rationalist audience, but I’d appreciate intelligent feedback on accuracy, additional ideas to possibly include, as well as feedback on how I communicate.
Where is a good place to get such feedback? LessWrong has a lot of the right sort of people, but posting lots of draft posts to the open thread may not be popular.
My blog is Habitua—it’s on self-improvement, attempting to be evidence-based as much as practicable.
Post 1 (http://habitua.net/how-to-use-rewards-to-defeat-procrastination/) : What’s the goal of this post? I don’t think it’s wrong but I can’t see the intention behind it.
The post about advertising also seems to lack a clear goal.
The intention was to give some direction as to the kinds of plans that can be effective in overcoming procrastination. I can see that more detailed suggestions would be helpful, and I’ll look at that in future posts. I’m deliberately keeping posts short, so I actually get them done and posted.
I thought that was an interesting insight into communication and the nature of advertising, but you’re right—the goal was not so clear.