It’s a nice idea, but I have to say a lot of it seems like it doesn’t really work metrically. E.g., “To Russell’s paradox, I have the set of all the answers” has only 15 syllables but it needs to have 16. (Several of the lines can be made to work if you pronounce “-tion” or “-tial” with two syllables like an old-fashioned Anglican church choir; maybe that’s deliberate?)
There were too many line pairs that could either have 15 syllables or be utterly mangled. I decided to compromise by alternating 16-syllable pairs with 15-syllable pairs and pretending it’s on purpose. There’s a reason I don’t advertise Putanumonit as a poetry blog :)
It’s a nice idea, but I have to say a lot of it seems like it doesn’t really work metrically. E.g., “To Russell’s paradox, I have the set of all the answers” has only 15 syllables but it needs to have 16. (Several of the lines can be made to work if you pronounce “-tion” or “-tial” with two syllables like an old-fashioned Anglican church choir; maybe that’s deliberate?)
There were too many line pairs that could either have 15 syllables or be utterly mangled. I decided to compromise by alternating 16-syllable pairs with 15-syllable pairs and pretending it’s on purpose. There’s a reason I don’t advertise Putanumonit as a poetry blog :)