If you feel like it should be written differently, then write it differently! Nobody is stopping you. Write a thousand roads to Rome.
Could Eliezer have written it differently? Maybe, maybe not. I don’t have access to his internal writing cognition any more than you do. Maybe this is the only way Eliezer could write it. Maybe he prefers it this way, I certainly do.
Light a candle, don’t curse the darkness. Build, don’t burn.
If you feel like it should be written differently, then write it differently! Nobody is stopping you. Write a thousand roads to Rome.
Could Eliezer have written it differently? Maybe, maybe not. I don’t have access to his internal writing cognition any more than you do. Maybe this is the only way Eliezer could write it. Maybe he prefers it this way, I certainly do.
Light a candle, don’t curse the darkness. Build, don’t burn.