Someone else pointed this out as well. I’m mulling over how to reword the intro so it retains its impact but is more accurate. I think it’s still legitimate to pay tribute to scary things in the darkest part of the year for symbolic reasons.
I just replaced “it” (referring to the Solstice) with “winter” in one of the opening paragraphs. Does it still feel inaccurate or misleading? If not, do you have some specific advice on how to reword it? I can begrudgingly sacrifice the intro and rework it completely if it’s fundamentally wrong, but I’ve other work that still needs doing.
You can emphasize that people had to rely on stored food during that time, and continue that if the food ran out before the first harvest they would starve.
We are in the process of planning a collection of holidays over the year. (‘Spring Equinox’ festival will be celebrated on Pi day, paying tribute to the cyclical rebirth of the world).
Most of these will probably be kept private, depending on how we decide to go about them.
Someone else pointed this out as well. I’m mulling over how to reword the intro so it retains its impact but is more accurate. I think it’s still legitimate to pay tribute to scary things in the darkest part of the year for symbolic reasons.
I just replaced “it” (referring to the Solstice) with “winter” in one of the opening paragraphs. Does it still feel inaccurate or misleading? If not, do you have some specific advice on how to reword it? I can begrudgingly sacrifice the intro and rework it completely if it’s fundamentally wrong, but I’ve other work that still needs doing.
You can emphasize that people had to rely on stored food during that time, and continue that if the food ran out before the first harvest they would starve.
How’s that? (edited in another change)
There is a hard limit on how many disclaimers I can stick in before it becomes bad political art.
So, do a Spring Equinox ritual. There’s lots of good material there: Death into Life, Dumuzi Is Risen, The King is Dead, Long Live the King … :-)
We are in the process of planning a collection of holidays over the year. (‘Spring Equinox’ festival will be celebrated on Pi day, paying tribute to the cyclical rebirth of the world).
Most of these will probably be kept private, depending on how we decide to go about them.
And a Solstice festival on Tau day?
Yes, actually.