Manon: Heh, the pre-redacted version was worse. But remember—talking about yourself and not talking about yourself are also signals of maturity. If you only wanted to convey the point—would it necessarily be any less effective?
On the other hand: short more focused paragraphs, definitely.
Manon: Heh, the pre-redacted version was worse. But remember—talking about yourself and not talking about yourself are also signals of maturity. If you only wanted to convey the point—would it necessarily be any less effective?
On the other hand: short more focused paragraphs, definitely.