I found Kenzie’s version of it moving specifically because of the deliberate difference and wouldn’t have felt motivated to include the original at all. I do realize it doesn’t actually change the semantic content, but it felt surprisingly poetic on it’s own and connected it more clearly to other ideas I cared about.
But, I wasn’t at all trying to deny Henley credit and have added him there.
I found Kenzie’s version of it moving specifically because of the deliberate difference and wouldn’t have felt motivated to include the original at all. I do realize it doesn’t actually change the semantic content, but it felt surprisingly poetic on it’s own and connected it more clearly to other ideas I cared about.
But, I wasn’t at all trying to deny Henley credit and have added him there.