This story reminded me distinctly of Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past—you might enjoy that one. Harry works until he’s 30 to kill Voldemort, and by the time he succeeds, everyone he loves is dead. He comes up with a time travel spell that breaks if the thing being transported has any mass, so he kills himself, and lets his soul do the travelling. 30-year-old Harry’s soul merges with 11-year-old Harry, and a very brilliant, very prepared, very powerful, and deeply disturbed young wizard enters Hogwarts.
It’s very well written technically—better than Eliezer who overindulges in speechifying, hyperbole, and italics—but in general Harry doesn’t seem disturbed enough, heals too easily, and there are too few repercussions from his foreknowledge. (Snape leaving and usurping Kakaroff at Durmstang seems to be about it.)
That, and the author may never finish, which is so frustrating an eventuality that I’m not sure I could recommend it to anyone.
Similar in premise is “The Mirror of Maybe” (slash warning, never-updates warning) in which a fifth-year Harry is shown a hypothetical future and uses the extensive knowledge gained thereby to ditch school, disguise himself as an adult, and become the greatest Gary Stu of all time. Slightly AU magic system and, as I warned, it never freakin’ updates.
I normally read within {nonfiction} U {authors’ other works} but I had such a blast with Methods of Rationality that I might try some more fiction.
This story reminded me distinctly of Harry Potter and the Nightmares of Futures Past—you might enjoy that one. Harry works until he’s 30 to kill Voldemort, and by the time he succeeds, everyone he loves is dead. He comes up with a time travel spell that breaks if the thing being transported has any mass, so he kills himself, and lets his soul do the travelling. 30-year-old Harry’s soul merges with 11-year-old Harry, and a very brilliant, very prepared, very powerful, and deeply disturbed young wizard enters Hogwarts.
I’ve finished reading that.
It’s very well written technically—better than Eliezer who overindulges in speechifying, hyperbole, and italics—but in general Harry doesn’t seem disturbed enough, heals too easily, and there are too few repercussions from his foreknowledge. (Snape leaving and usurping Kakaroff at Durmstang seems to be about it.)
That, and the author may never finish, which is so frustrating an eventuality that I’m not sure I could recommend it to anyone.
AH… spoiler!
Snape leaving is hardly a spoiler, since so far it hasn’t affected anything...
Similar in premise is “The Mirror of Maybe” (slash warning, never-updates warning) in which a fifth-year Harry is shown a hypothetical future and uses the extensive knowledge gained thereby to ditch school, disguise himself as an adult, and become the greatest Gary Stu of all time. Slightly AU magic system and, as I warned, it never freakin’ updates.
lol
I like all of Eliezer’s fiction… if you want more like this, see the pseudo-sequel, http://lesswrong.com/lw/18g/the_finale_of_the_ultimate_meta_mega_crossover/ It is too insane of a story to recommend to most people, but assuming you’ve read Eliezer’s non-fiction, you can jump right in.
Otherwise, just about all of Eliezer’s fiction is worth reading, Three World’s Collide is his best work of fiction.