There are no reader comments—this is a “glowfic”, the whole thread is the story. Each “comment” is a portion of the story. You need read it all.
You do need pay attention to the usernames because they often identify which character is speaking (e.g. “Keltham”, or “Carissa Sevar”), and an approximation of their facial expression via the graphics.
(The post times and history of each comment are not important in-story, the “history” are just edits made to that story portion, the post times are just when it was posted)
One of the authors is “Iarwain” (who is EY) the other author is “lintamande”.
There are no reader comments—this is a “glowfic”, the whole thread is the story. Each “comment” is a portion of the story. You need read it all.
You do need pay attention to the usernames because they often identify which character is speaking (e.g. “Keltham”, or “Carissa Sevar”), and an approximation of their facial expression via the graphics.
(The post times and history of each comment are not important in-story, the “history” are just edits made to that story portion, the post times are just when it was posted)
One of the authors is “Iarwain” (who is EY) the other author is “lintamande”.