What is your intended audience? You said “high school students,” and to me this seems great for gifted high school students
Yes, gifted high school students.
I think this essay is good but would be much improved by a few examples of each point you make, and an explanation of who Paul Graham is (if your audience is average high schoolers outside the Bay Area).
Thanks.
Your last point is also not well explained.
Yes, we need to write up material on homeschooling.
Yes, gifted high school students.
Thanks.
Yes, we need to write up material on homeschooling.