Maybe make sure the first three sentences, and the title, actually tell the reader what the post is about?
Cat or Rabbit
First go at this went terrible, but best to revise.
This is a post containing dark arts. It is an entirely irrational emotional appeal as to why rationality is a better way to be.
… admittedly that last sentence kinda says what the post is about, but it’s a bit vague. And the first two sentences don’t bring anything at all, and don’t catch the reader’s attention either.
Maybe make sure the first three sentences, and the title, actually tell the reader what the post is about?
… admittedly that last sentence kinda says what the post is about, but it’s a bit vague. And the first two sentences don’t bring anything at all, and don’t catch the reader’s attention either.