The point is a stream of consciousness is a waste of time to read. I got 3 boring topics into your post before I gave up with no idea of what your actual point is and no desire to continue. When writing for the benefit of others you should not approach it as a puzzle that you are giving them to figure out but as a piece of news it’s important for them to read.
Still a rambling incoherent stream of consciousness. It’s like you are not listening to the suggestions given to you in your previous attempts.
Yes the post is written in a stream of consciousness type manner. Is that all you have to say?
I’m expecting the readers to be smart, it shouldn’t be that hard to figure out.
The point is a stream of consciousness is a waste of time to read. I got 3 boring topics into your post before I gave up with no idea of what your actual point is and no desire to continue. When writing for the benefit of others you should not approach it as a puzzle that you are giving them to figure out but as a piece of news it’s important for them to read.