Thanks for writing this—I’m enjoying it a great deal. Protagonists with uncommon POVs, and who might be outright unreliable as narrators, often make for enjoyable stories.
Typos:
throwing Luna across the across the broad hallway
armfulls → armfuls (I was surprised that this spelling was correct)
She discovered the entrances to the kitchen which is off-limits → “entrance … is” or “entrances … are”
Thanks for writing this—I’m enjoying it a great deal. Protagonists with uncommon POVs, and who might be outright unreliable as narrators, often make for enjoyable stories.
Typos:
throwing Luna across the across the broad hallway
armfulls → armfuls (I was surprised that this spelling was correct)
She discovered the entrances to the kitchen which is off-limits → “entrance … is” or “entrances … are”
Fixed the typos! I’m enjoying writing it too.