I totally agree that the dude’s critique didn’t have much substance. That example, and several others, are all things were now I can see and feel the lack of substance. It was very real then though. In writing this I tried to emphasize that aspect, the way there wasn’t much putting things in context, the way that by strategy for dealing with people made it very hard to go “k, jelly person critiquing with no substance”.
That certainly would have made a cool diary :)
I totally agree that the dude’s critique didn’t have much substance. That example, and several others, are all things were now I can see and feel the lack of substance. It was very real then though. In writing this I tried to emphasize that aspect, the way there wasn’t much putting things in context, the way that by strategy for dealing with people made it very hard to go “k, jelly person critiquing with no substance”.