“If the coin comes head, we give him 18 paperclips. If it comes tail, we give him nothing.” should be “If the coin comes up heads, we give him 18 paperclips. If it comes up tails, we give him nothing.”
“he’s attracted by Dors” is more conventionally “he’s attracted to Dors”
It’s actually “let’s shift”.
Also:
“a 10-sided dice” should be “a 10-sided die”
“If the coin comes head, we give him 18 paperclips. If it comes tail, we give him nothing.” should be “If the coin comes up heads, we give him 18 paperclips. If it comes up tails, we give him nothing.”
“he’s attracted by Dors” is more conventionally “he’s attracted to Dors”
Great article overall!
Thanks, I fixed those issues. (Sorry, I’m not a native english speaker...)