Interesting subject, thanks! However, I found it a bit hard to distill the overall message you’d like to convey, i.e., the conclusion. Maybe there should be a final paragraph to bind the threads together?
I am not a psychologist so I am not conveying a message here beyond this: I did a bunch of reading in this area earlier this year and these three items stand out to me as significant and not generally appreciated (I did not appreciate them very much a year ago) and people here might find them interesting.
Interesting subject, thanks! However, I found it a bit hard to distill the overall message you’d like to convey, i.e., the conclusion. Maybe there should be a final paragraph to bind the threads together?
I am not a psychologist so I am not conveying a message here beyond this: I did a bunch of reading in this area earlier this year and these three items stand out to me as significant and not generally appreciated (I did not appreciate them very much a year ago) and people here might find them interesting.