Okay, there’s probably no point in nitpicking a parody, but Fluttershy doesn’t have a horn, she’s a pegasus, not a unicorn.
Edit to add: but seriously there’s no point in fussing over perfecting such an omake. Frankly I thought the first version was somewhat better, as “Mary Sue” parodies are a bit cliche.
Okay, there’s probably no point in nitpicking a parody, but Fluttershy doesn’t have a horn, she’s a pegasus, not a unicorn.
Edit to add: but seriously there’s no point in fussing over perfecting such an omake. Frankly I thought the first version was somewhat better, as “Mary Sue” parodies are a bit cliche.
Seconded on the first version being better.
Did anybody archive a copy of the first version? I was too late to the party to see it.
Also, “plot” is ponyfan slang for butts.
Edit: Well, someone had to say it.