This seems like a reasonable set of examples, though I’m not someone who was concerned by a lack of warmth, so not ideal to judge who well you’ve understood their critique.
My only concern is that you might have been unfair to the warmth side, as your cold responses look much better—I’d much rather have them, efficient, information dense and clear as they are.
This seems like a reasonable set of examples, though I’m not someone who was concerned by a lack of warmth, so not ideal to judge who well you’ve understood their critique.
My only concern is that you might have been unfair to the warmth side, as your cold responses look much better—I’d much rather have them, efficient, information dense and clear as they are.