I found this particular obfuscation distracting, because I imagine hot air ballooning to be a much more expensive activity than this. And I think an important part of your claim was that was that you can do this weekend activity cheaper than one might expect, because of Community Capital. But I couldn’t suspend my disbelief that you could do a weekend of hot air ballooning for $35 per person.
If it’s helpful, in my head I was thinking like “blowing up (regular) balloons” and then making balloon art or something. I could change it, but I don’t know if that would be the most useful now, since a lot of the comments mention it.
I found this particular obfuscation distracting, because I imagine hot air ballooning to be a much more expensive activity than this. And I think an important part of your claim was that was that you can do this weekend activity cheaper than one might expect, because of Community Capital. But I couldn’t suspend my disbelief that you could do a weekend of hot air ballooning for $35 per person.
If it’s helpful, in my head I was thinking like “blowing up (regular) balloons” and then making balloon art or something. I could change it, but I don’t know if that would be the most useful now, since a lot of the comments mention it.