This is quite a good presentation, especially the first half. I’d recommend taking the first 20 or so slides (the impact falls off in the second half, as the presentation jumps from place to place and looks disconnected), adding in a nice conclusion somewhere around slide 22 and putting the link on the front page of LW.
This is quite a good presentation, especially the first half. I’d recommend taking the first 20 or so slides (the impact falls off in the second half, as the presentation jumps from place to place and looks disconnected), adding in a nice conclusion somewhere around slide 22 and putting the link on the front page of LW.