The writing errors in this story are very distracting. I did not click past chapter 1. Is there something to recommend it so strongly that I should get over the bad grammar etc.?
I also found the spellign and grammer mistakes to be distracting. The story itself does not quite compare to Yudkowsky or Rowling’s work, but it’s quite witty and makes some good rationalist points.
It’s a lot more Ender’s Game like than MoR already was. The ideas are good to decent, the execution questionable and the writing poor (by fanfiction worth reading standards, decent by average fanfiction standards). I found it fairly enjoyable, but I mostly managed to tune out the quality of the writing.
I’d recommend it to anyone who loves MoR for the clever plots, and anyone who enjoys the clever plots and can get over bad writing.
The writing errors in this story are very distracting. I did not click past chapter 1. Is there something to recommend it so strongly that I should get over the bad grammar etc.?
I also found the spellign and grammer mistakes to be distracting. The story itself does not quite compare to Yudkowsky or Rowling’s work, but it’s quite witty and makes some good rationalist points.
I just can’t leave this alone.
Intentional!
If you can get someone to write you a fully-spoiling summary, that might be better.
I’d read one of those. Any volunteers?
It’s a lot more Ender’s Game like than MoR already was. The ideas are good to decent, the execution questionable and the writing poor (by fanfiction worth reading standards, decent by average fanfiction standards). I found it fairly enjoyable, but I mostly managed to tune out the quality of the writing.
I’d recommend it to anyone who loves MoR for the clever plots, and anyone who enjoys the clever plots and can get over bad writing.