I think “Britpicking” is the appropriate term, but “crap” is an incongruous word for Moody to keep using the way he does. “Crap” as an interjection is a very American-sounding usage.
I noticed that too—I’m not sure what it is with Moody, but in an earlier revision of Chapter 97 he’d ended the chapter by saying “what the crap—” (it’s now been changed to “WHAT—”). It’s unclear if EY edited the earlier chapter because it wasn’t very British or because it seemed out-of-place, but for whatever reason, he’s saying it again now.
I think “Britpicking” is the appropriate term, but “crap” is an incongruous word for Moody to keep using the way he does. “Crap” as an interjection is a very American-sounding usage.
I noticed that too—I’m not sure what it is with Moody, but in an earlier revision of Chapter 97 he’d ended the chapter by saying “what the crap—” (it’s now been changed to “WHAT—”). It’s unclear if EY edited the earlier chapter because it wasn’t very British or because it seemed out-of-place, but for whatever reason, he’s saying it again now.