Not at the moment of reading, possibly because I had no standard of comparison. In retrospect, the line “Beyond the reach of God” doesn’t reinforce the vision of transcendent humanity quite as powerfully as the original. I think it was the unexpected contrast of moving from the discussion of evolutionary psychology to this futuristic vision of humanity that gave the ending its power.
Did you end up with strong opinions on the “Beyond the Reach of God” line?
Not at the moment of reading, possibly because I had no standard of comparison. In retrospect, the line “Beyond the reach of God” doesn’t reinforce the vision of transcendent humanity quite as powerfully as the original. I think it was the unexpected contrast of moving from the discussion of evolutionary psychology to this futuristic vision of humanity that gave the ending its power.