I think this post is good for general consumption (if we’re thinking of general consumption as can be read and understood by the median college student). I think the ideal format for this post if targeted at that audience is probably different though—ideally, a lot of the text would be collapsible and hidden by default unless people want to read the longer explanation. So someone coming across this post could quickly understand the structure of the argument and then dive deeper into the sections they are unconvinced by or that feel unclear.
I think this post is good for general consumption (if we’re thinking of general consumption as can be read and understood by the median college student). I think the ideal format for this post if targeted at that audience is probably different though—ideally, a lot of the text would be collapsible and hidden by default unless people want to read the longer explanation. So someone coming across this post could quickly understand the structure of the argument and then dive deeper into the sections they are unconvinced by or that feel unclear.