OP here to clarify.
Was the edit just to add the big disclaimer about motivation at the top?
Edits—Added disclaimer at the top; changed every instance of “mating” to “dating”; replaced personal details with <anonymized>
I honestly don’t see what is so objectionable about the original version either. I like your last sentence, will add that as well.
OP here to clarify.
Edits—Added disclaimer at the top; changed every instance of “mating” to “dating”; replaced personal details with <anonymized>
I honestly don’t see what is so objectionable about the original version either. I like your last sentence, will add that as well.