This seems to be a consistent (and not really surprising) point of criticism. I’ll soon try rewriting the first chapter somewhat to see if I can make a version which works better. Though I suspect that the book is inevitably going to have somewhat of a preachy feeling, in part simply because I’m not as good of a writer as EY.
This seems to be a consistent (and not really surprising) point of criticism. I’ll soon try rewriting the first chapter somewhat to see if I can make a version which works better. Though I suspect that the book is inevitably going to have somewhat of a preachy feeling, in part simply because I’m not as good of a writer as EY.