I agree that the end result is not good so far. I mean, it is more than enough for giving me approval. But it fails in its multiplicity, as made obvious by the downvotes, which I think were fairly deserved, given how much a writing of this kind is not the expected Lesswrong discussion post.
In my experience (as a reader), most articles written with this goal are horrible. Please don’t do this.
I agree that the end result is not good so far. I mean, it is more than enough for giving me approval. But it fails in its multiplicity, as made obvious by the downvotes, which I think were fairly deserved, given how much a writing of this kind is not the expected Lesswrong discussion post.