You’re right. I’ve made an attempt at editing the intro in that direction, which may be somewhat lame, as I had no point to make originally :)
I originally intended only to share the two examples without commentary, but as I examined the meta-analysis, it occurred to me that not everyone would have access to the full text.
This would be easier to follow and more enjoyable to read if you stated what point you’re trying to make, preferably before the large quotations.
You’re right. I’ve made an attempt at editing the intro in that direction, which may be somewhat lame, as I had no point to make originally :)
I originally intended only to share the two examples without commentary, but as I examined the meta-analysis, it occurred to me that not everyone would have access to the full text.
I think it’s a big improvement, thanks.