If you’re still thinking about turning this sequence into a book (or have you already done so? This business of reading and responding years after the fact is a bit disorienting sometimes.)
I believe the first draft is nearly complete, and he’s approaching the seeking-a-publisher stage, followed by the writing-a-second-and-third-draft stage
I believe the first draft is nearly complete, and he’s approaching the seeking-a-publisher stage, followed by the writing-a-second-and-third-draft stage