I started reading this, got about halfway through, and had no idea what the core thesis was and got bored and stopped. Can you briefly summarize what you expected people to get out of it?
Huh, okay I do see that now (I was fairly tired when I read it, and still fairly tired now).
I think I have a smaller-scale version of the same criticism to level at your comment as the original post, which is that it’s a bit long and meandering and wall-of-text-y in a way that makes it hard to parse. (In your case I think just adding more paragraph breaks would solve it though)
I started reading this, got about halfway through, and had no idea what the core thesis was and got bored and stopped. Can you briefly summarize what you expected people to get out of it?
That’s literally the post you are replying to. Did you have trouble reading that?
Huh, okay I do see that now (I was fairly tired when I read it, and still fairly tired now).
I think I have a smaller-scale version of the same criticism to level at your comment as the original post, which is that it’s a bit long and meandering and wall-of-text-y in a way that makes it hard to parse. (In your case I think just adding more paragraph breaks would solve it though)