Just a nitpick, from one non-native English speaker (to another ?), I have been told that the word “retard” is extremely offensive (in american English at least). I’d say up to you to decide if that was your intended effect.
Not a native speaker. I wanted it to be offensive but not to the extent where you would have to kill the offender and whole his family to restore the honor. Changed to “moron”.
Just a nitpick, from one non-native English speaker (to another ?), I have been told that the word “retard” is extremely offensive (in american English at least). I’d say up to you to decide if that was your intended effect.
Not a native speaker. I wanted it to be offensive but not to the extent where you would have to kill the offender and whole his family to restore the honor. Changed to “moron”.