That’s one step, you need to take more—“connect to people” is too vague as people you might want to connect to are likely different and could be interested in you for different reasons.
Let’s try approaching it from another direction. A FB account projects a certain public (and semi-private) image. Which characteristics and qualities you would like to project and which ones you would like to avoid? Note that generalities (“smart, beautiful, rich, and lucky”) are not going to be particularly useful here :-/
That’s one step, you need to take more—“connect to people” is too vague as people you might want to connect to are likely different and could be interested in you for different reasons.
Let’s try approaching it from another direction. A FB account projects a certain public (and semi-private) image. Which characteristics and qualities you would like to project and which ones you would like to avoid? Note that generalities (“smart, beautiful, rich, and lucky”) are not going to be particularly useful here :-/
If I’m honest I’d probably go for getting my sense of humor there. I’ll have to do it myself though. It’s going to be hilarious.
If you put it that way, “connect to people” is more like a purpose rather than a step.
Good way to word it; I’ll have to think about it.