I gave it another stab (I’m trying to see if I can synthesize your feedback without copying you word-for-word as a comprehension test); please feel free to PM me if it still doesn’t look right. I definitely appreciate the assistance tuning my technical writing, and I think it’s likely this will be helpful to future readers.
I gave it another stab (I’m trying to see if I can synthesize your feedback without copying you word-for-word as a comprehension test); please feel free to PM me if it still doesn’t look right. I definitely appreciate the assistance tuning my technical writing, and I think it’s likely this will be helpful to future readers.
Looks good now.