I don’t think that is an on-point critique of this essay. If defining your terms makes your message incomprehensible, that’s a problem with the medium you’ve chosen or the message itself.
“US Copyright law is bad” is a pithy summary of Lawrence Lessig’s book, but the sentence fails to persuade or even communicate effectively—which is why Lessig wrote a book.
And if your message is simply too long to be comprehensible, it doesn’t become comprehensible simply because you choose to use words idiosyncratically to shorten character length of the message.
In the hands of a hostile audience, “Taboo Your Words” can be a very effective way to derail the discussion. But if you are not communicating effectively with a good-faith listener, it is a powerful tool to discover the root of the mis-communication.
And if you are communicating effectively, why are you tabooing your words? The article doesn’t suggest using more words for its own sake.
If defining your terms makes your message incomprehensible, that’s a problem with the medium you’ve chosen or the message itself.
Defining terms inline can make things hard to understand simply because human beings don’t have a large stack size for the purpose of understanding sentences containing many inline clauses. I suppose that’s a problem with the medium—if the medium is “speech by human beings”.
I don’t think that is an on-point critique of this essay. If defining your terms makes your message incomprehensible, that’s a problem with the medium you’ve chosen or the message itself.
“US Copyright law is bad” is a pithy summary of Lawrence Lessig’s book, but the sentence fails to persuade or even communicate effectively—which is why Lessig wrote a book.
And if your message is simply too long to be comprehensible, it doesn’t become comprehensible simply because you choose to use words idiosyncratically to shorten character length of the message.
In the hands of a hostile audience, “Taboo Your Words” can be a very effective way to derail the discussion. But if you are not communicating effectively with a good-faith listener, it is a powerful tool to discover the root of the mis-communication.
And if you are communicating effectively, why are you tabooing your words? The article doesn’t suggest using more words for its own sake.
Defining terms inline can make things hard to understand simply because human beings don’t have a large stack size for the purpose of understanding sentences containing many inline clauses. I suppose that’s a problem with the medium—if the medium is “speech by human beings”.
The essay isn’t about speech, it’s about communication. Outside the scope of this essay, but sometime speech is the wrong medium.