Very good overall. The biggest problem is “Indefinite life extension becomes a reality; people die only if they choose to. Death loses its sting once and for all. Kurzweil hopes to bring his dead father back to life.” The prediction that is both least likely and most shocking is introduced without any explanation of how it could be done or how likely Kurzweil thinks it is.
Very good overall. The biggest problem is “Indefinite life extension becomes a reality; people die only if they choose to. Death loses its sting once and for all. Kurzweil hopes to bring his dead father back to life.” The prediction that is both least likely and most shocking is introduced without any explanation of how it could be done or how likely Kurzweil thinks it is.