your phrasing “or someone whose moral uncertainty includes total utilitarianism” suggested to me that you thought total utilitarianism would be important even if assigned a low weight, which suggested that it was not being normalised.
Ok, I didn’t mean that. What I meant was that if your moral uncertainty includes total utilitarianism, then the total utilitarian part should reason as follows. Would it be clearer / clear enough if I replaced “or someone whose moral uncertainty includes total utilitarianism” with “or the total utilitarianism part of someone’s moral uncertainty”?
Ok, I didn’t mean that. What I meant was that if your moral uncertainty includes total utilitarianism, then the total utilitarian part should reason as follows. Would it be clearer / clear enough if I replaced “or someone whose moral uncertainty includes total utilitarianism” with “or the total utilitarianism part of someone’s moral uncertainty”?
I think that would be clearer, yes.
Thanks, I’ve made that edit.