We like intense. Persuasion is bad, but that’s not the problem. The problem is that your post is incoherent. It lacks a central thesis.
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We like intense. Persuasion is bad, but that’s not the problem. The problem is that your post is incoherent. It lacks a central thesis.
[Meta: I wrote this comment because you specifically requested more negative feedback.]