The deeper problem in Ch. 6 is that Harry’s conflict with Professor McGonagall looks too much like a victory – it is a major flaw of Methods that Harry doesn’t lose hard until Ch. 10, so he must at least not win too much before then. That’s the part I’m working on at this very instant.
Strongly disagree with this. That’s the bit that caused me to continue reading. Luckily, I have the raw text downloaded, and can make my own canonical printed version.
Strongly disagree with this. That’s the bit that caused me to continue reading. Luckily, I have the raw text downloaded, and can make my own canonical printed version.