I like the new changes to chapter 7 (I’m not sure how long they’ve been up). The conversation between Harry and Draco flows better, makes more sense for the characters, and the force of the original text is still present.
Two thumbs up!
I like the new changes to chapter 7 (I’m not sure how long they’ve been up). The conversation between Harry and Draco flows better, makes more sense for the characters, and the force of the original text is still present.
Two thumbs up!