I felt that all of the points made could be said in a post about half the length. The points are something I have noticed, do not need to be persuaded of, and put into better words than I could have before (which illustrates a main point of the post) but I feel that they could persuade a sceptical reader, even if rewritten at half the length.
Would you care to take your shot at rewriting at half the length? That only half of my post is useful or necessary for a reader, is a very common phenomenon; the problem is, it’s not always the same half for each reader.
I felt that all of the points made could be said in a post about half the length. The points are something I have noticed, do not need to be persuaded of, and put into better words than I could have before (which illustrates a main point of the post) but I feel that they could persuade a sceptical reader, even if rewritten at half the length.
Would you care to take your shot at rewriting at half the length? That only half of my post is useful or necessary for a reader, is a very common phenomenon; the problem is, it’s not always the same half for each reader.