There was one thing that annoyed me about this. Harry wasn’t just fighting Voldemort. He barely even cares about Voldemort. He’s fighting everything bad about the universe. If he was truly willing to take the gloves off after the first death, then he would have done so after about half a second.
Actually, this is the aftermath of the Taboo Tradeoffs arc (i.e., the Wizengamot trial): yes, Harry doesn’t care about Voldemort, but he does have a very specific enemy at this point—the person who tried to murder Draco and send Hermione to Azkaban (or at least the second, if it was Quirrell—of course I expect it was Quirrellmort, but Harry only thinks of Quirrell as one of a range of different suspects). And by the time of Ch. 85, to Harry’s knowledge, nobody has yet died in that particular war.
If we’re talking about the story as a whole, sure. If we’re talking specifically about the two incarnations of Ch. 85 (which I was), let me quote:
This day your war against Voldemort has begun...
Dumbledore had said that, after the Incident with Rescuing Bellatrix from Azkaban. That had been a false alarm, but the phrase expressed the sentiment well.
Two nights ago his war had begun, and Harry didn’t know with who.
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Someone had declared war against Harry, their first strike had been meant to take out Draco and Hermione both, and it was only by the barest of margins that Harry had saved Hermione.
Sure, Harry doesn’t actually want to kill that unknown enemy—it is also Ch. 85 where he thinks about how killing Voldemort would make the people of a hundred million years into the future terribly sad—but he very much does think in terms of a human target at this point in time who he wants to win against.
There was one thing that annoyed me about this. Harry wasn’t just fighting Voldemort. He barely even cares about Voldemort. He’s fighting everything bad about the universe. If he was truly willing to take the gloves off after the first death, then he would have done so after about half a second.
Actually, this is the aftermath of the Taboo Tradeoffs arc (i.e., the Wizengamot trial): yes, Harry doesn’t care about Voldemort, but he does have a very specific enemy at this point—the person who tried to murder Draco and send Hermione to Azkaban (or at least the second, if it was Quirrell—of course I expect it was Quirrellmort, but Harry only thinks of Quirrell as one of a range of different suspects). And by the time of Ch. 85, to Harry’s knowledge, nobody has yet died in that particular war.
I don’t think Harry’s target is a person at all, but Death itself. That’s the enemy. Harry would actually save Voldemort from Death if he could.
If we’re talking about the story as a whole, sure. If we’re talking specifically about the two incarnations of Ch. 85 (which I was), let me quote:
Sure, Harry doesn’t actually want to kill that unknown enemy—it is also Ch. 85 where he thinks about how killing Voldemort would make the people of a hundred million years into the future terribly sad—but he very much does think in terms of a human target at this point in time who he wants to win against.
Per chapter 90, I don’t see him thinking about his human enemy, I see him obsessing about defeating Death to save Hermione.