Ugh! The vomitous mass of facts and details. I can’t stand articles like that. A little quote starts ringing through my mind “When you talk like this, I can’t help but wonder, do you have a point?”
Done properly, it’s like watching an interlaced image load in. First pass, tell the story in one sentence. Second pass, use a four sentence paragraph. Third pass, four paragraphs. Recurse as needed.
Done properly, it’s like watching an interlaced image load in. First pass, tell the story in one sentence. Second pass, use a four sentence paragraph. Third pass, four paragraphs. Recurse as needed.
Order still matters on each pass.