Thank you, on the contrary, this is constructive critique kindly put; highly appreciated! I actually myself was a bit at a loss of how to present it: Summary intro? A telling subtitle e.g. “Of AI, illusionism, and fading altruism” at least? Eventually, I opted to do try to not spoil the slight mystery in the story at all, and I added all in a lengthy Afterword (first indeed containing a summary btw, and then a more detailed explanation), trusting in part that the tags give at least a slight hint as to the broader topic.
Given your comment, I now plan to add at the very top add a brief overview, maybe as little as a one-sentence extra terse un-spoiling overview including a link to the summary found at the beginning of the Afterword. Tbc.
Thank you, on the contrary, this is constructive critique kindly put; highly appreciated! I actually myself was a bit at a loss of how to present it: Summary intro? A telling subtitle e.g. “Of AI, illusionism, and fading altruism” at least? Eventually, I opted to do try to not spoil the slight mystery in the story at all, and I added all in a lengthy Afterword (first indeed containing a summary btw, and then a more detailed explanation), trusting in part that the tags give at least a slight hint as to the broader topic.
Given your comment, I now plan to add at the very top add a brief overview, maybe as little as a one-sentence extra terse un-spoiling overview including a link to the summary found at the beginning of the Afterword. Tbc.