No, not really. I read it twice but couldn’t bring myself to care. It seems you are going into tangents and not actually talking directly about your technique. I could be wrong, but I also couldn’t care enough to read into the sentences and understand what you’re actually pointing at with all the words. Having conclusion is nice because I jumped straight to that at first, seems kind of too normal to justify the clickbait though. Overall I feel like I read some ramblings and didn’t learn much.
I’m talking about doing an audit of your whole life regularly, desperately trying to find the most effective things. Also, this technique is about highlighting potentially the most effective actions that you didn’t spend a lot of time thinking about, but put them down as “stupid” because, for example, you need to get out of your comfort zone.
I would suggest using less clickbaity titles on LessWrong
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This is like raw, n=1, personal feedback.
No, not really. I read it twice but couldn’t bring myself to care. It seems you are going into tangents and not actually talking directly about your technique. I could be wrong, but I also couldn’t care enough to read into the sentences and understand what you’re actually pointing at with all the words. Having conclusion is nice because I jumped straight to that at first, seems kind of too normal to justify the clickbait though. Overall I feel like I read some ramblings and didn’t learn much.
I’m talking about doing an audit of your whole life regularly, desperately trying to find the most effective things. Also, this technique is about highlighting potentially the most effective actions that you didn’t spend a lot of time thinking about, but put them down as “stupid” because, for example, you need to get out of your comfort zone.
Does it clear?
that is much clearer that I think you should have said it out loud in the post
Okay I’ll rewrite the post. Thanks for your answers