It’s pretty depressing to hear this is cringe-worthy but thanks :). Do you think the addition of “however” is enough? I think you’re right about the abruptness and it seems to me like that really helps.
As a piece of writing, it fulfills the purpose for which it was intended. However, that purpose is a necessary evil. Please don’t take it personally.
It’s pretty depressing to hear this is cringe-worthy but thanks :). Do you think the addition of “however” is enough? I think you’re right about the abruptness and it seems to me like that really helps.
As a piece of writing, it fulfills the purpose for which it was intended. However, that purpose is a necessary evil. Please don’t take it personally.