I already blunted the message a bit. What do you think of
That the sad things about being human may not be immutable; that we can challenge the big problems, like disease, aging, and perhaps even death.
Do you still think it would be better without the “that”s?
I think the “that”s work (or at least taking them out makes for a much smaller improvement), but what do you think of
That the sad things about being human may not be immutable; that we can challenge the big problems of disease, aging, and perhaps even death.
I already blunted the message a bit. What do you think of
Do you still think it would be better without the “that”s?
I think the “that”s work (or at least taking them out makes for a much smaller improvement), but what do you think of